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ChatGPT prompt for fiction writing

This prompt produces a focused fiction scene with a distinct narrative voice, concrete detail, and a purposeful change. Use it when you know the story moment you need to write but want a strong first draft.

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Write a fiction scene for [STORY PREMISE] in the voice and point of view described in [VOICE AND POV]. The scene occurs when [SCENE SITUATION], and its job in the story is [SCENE PURPOSE]. Use these established facts about character, setting, relationships, and continuity: [STORY NOTES].

Draft 900–1,300 words of polished prose. Begin after the scene has already started; do not open with backstory, weather, a character waking up, or a broad explanation of the setting. Put a character under immediate pressure within the first two paragraphs.

Build the scene around a concrete want, an obstacle, and a choice that changes the character’s situation, understanding, or relationship by the final paragraph. Let exposition emerge through action, selective dialogue, objects, and what the viewpoint character notices. Include at least three sensory details that reveal place or mood, but avoid a catalogue of description.

Use dialogue only where it changes the power balance, reveals a concealed intention, or forces a decision. Give each major character a different conversational rhythm without spelling out personality traits. Keep the viewpoint consistent: do not report thoughts or knowledge unavailable to the chosen narrator. Avoid melodrama, stock metaphors, summary of emotions, and dialogue that explains information both speakers already know.

After the scene, add a short “Continuity and craft notes” section with: the scene’s turning point, two unresolved tensions it creates, and any details from my notes that need confirmation rather than invention. Do not add lore, biography, geography, or plot events not supported by my inputs. Before answering, check that the scene contains a visible change and that every point-of-view detail could be perceived by the narrator. Ask up to 3 clarifying questions only if a required input is missing.

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[STORY PREMISE]Give a one- or two-sentence description of the larger story.A municipal archivist discovers that a coastal town has quietly erased one resident from every public record after each major storm.
[VOICE AND POV]Specify tense, narrator, genre, reading level, and desired qualities of the prose voice.Close third person, past tense, literary suspense, restrained and observant, with plain contemporary language.
[SCENE SITUATION]Describe where and when the scene happens, who is present, and the immediate event.At dusk in a flooded records basement, Mara and the deputy mayor sort damaged files while the backup generator begins to fail.
[SCENE PURPOSE]Explain what must change or be revealed by the end of this scene.Mara must realize the deputy mayor knows about the erased names and decide whether to take the only surviving ledger.
[STORY NOTES]Provide established facts, character motivations, prior events, and details the draft must preserve.Mara’s brother vanished in the 2008 storm; she has not told anyone. The mayor is charming in public but absent tonight. The ledger is bound in green canvas and cannot be opened underwater.

How to use

  1. Paste established story facts rather than asking the model to create an entire canon from scratch.
  2. Name the scene’s change, not simply its topic; “Mara steals the ledger” is more useful than “Mara learns a secret.”
  3. Check the final draft against your character knowledge, timeline, and point of view before keeping any new detail.
  4. Follow up with: “Revise this scene so the same turning point happens through less dialogue and more physical action.”

Variations

Opening chapter

Use this when you need an opening that establishes a story engine without overexplaining it.

Variation
Write the opening 1,000–1,500 words of a [GENRE] novel about [PREMISE]. Use [POV AND VOICE]. The opening disturbance is [INCITING MOMENT], and these facts must remain true: [CANON]. Introduce the protagonist through a choice under pressure, establish a specific setting through sensory action, and end on a question or consequence that makes the next scene necessary. Do not summarize the protagonist’s history, explain the world’s rules in a block, or introduce more named characters than the scene needs. Afterward, list the hook, promised conflict, and any continuity assumptions. Ask up to 3 questions only if a required input is missing.

Character dialogue

Use this when the scene is working but a difficult conversation feels flat or explanatory.

Variation
Write a 600–900 word dialogue-led scene between [CHARACTER A] and [CHARACTER B] about [CONFLICT]. The setting and interruption are [SETTING]. Their private goals, relationship history, and facts that cannot change are [NOTES]. Give each person a different tactic and let the real disagreement sit partly beneath what they say. Use gestures, silences, and interruptions sparingly to shift power. The conversation must end with a decision, rupture, or new obligation. Do not use dialogue to repeat backstory both characters know. Add five lines explaining each character’s tactic and the scene’s turn. Ask up to 3 questions only if needed.

Revision pass

Use this when you have a draft scene and want targeted developmental editing.

Variation
Revise the fiction excerpt below for tension, viewpoint consistency, and concrete detail while preserving its events, narrator, and approximate length. The story context is [CONTEXT], and the excerpt is [EXCERPT]. Return first a clean revised version, then a brief edit memo listing changes to scene objective, pacing, dialogue, and repeated imagery. Do not replace the author’s voice with generic polished prose, add unsupported plot facts, or alter the ending. Flag continuity questions instead of answering them yourself. Before answering, check that every edit serves the scene’s conflict and that no point-of-view breach remains. Ask up to 3 questions only if a required input is missing.

Tips

  • Give the model a scene objective with a change in power, knowledge, or commitment; a setting alone rarely produces a scene with momentum.
  • If a character describes their own emotion, ask for a revision that replaces the label with behavior, attention, or an action they avoid.
  • Use AI drafts to test scene architecture, then restore your own unusual diction and rhythm during revision so the narration does not flatten.
  • Keep a separate continuity sheet for dates, injuries, travel time, objects, and character knowledge; language models often create plausible but incompatible details.

FAQ

Can I use this for a whole novel?

Use it scene by scene or chapter by chapter. A short continuity brief for each request is more reliable than asking a model to retain a long manuscript perfectly.

How do I get a less generic voice?

Name point of view, tense, genre, sentence texture, and a few voice constraints. Supply a short sample you own if you want the draft to match your existing work.

Will the prompt prevent clichés completely?

No. It sets useful constraints, but you still need to identify familiar imagery, predictable reactions, and exposition in revision.

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